red sun ad

[a medium shot of the doctor from the backside of his head, turns around; camera 1; background music starts]
Have you ever found your children looking depressed and unhappy?

[medium shot, doctor turns to left side; camera 2]
involved with the wrong friends and you dont know whatelse to do?

[close up shot, doctor turns his head to right side; camera 1]
Let us in Red Sun help you!

[long shot, camera pan from doctor to his/her surroundings]
Here in Red Sun's beautiful facility, we will help your children discover their true happiness and lead them to find their own peace of mind.

[various shots -> e.g: a group of 'happy-faced' people talking with the 'mentor'; cafetaria scene, people eating, chatting with food + dodgy cups of drugs in their trays; people in a park lying or doing things while on the farside of the background there's a slight view of someone being caught for trying to escape; etc]
Red Sun provides intensive care for your loved ones with engaging activities in a very welcoming surroundings they will never find elsewhere, even in your own perfect home.

[medium shot of the doctor]
So call us in 555-7281 and register them...

[more close up shot, pointing at the camera perhaps]
or even yourself.

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[a woman's soothing voice; Red Sun logo/poster fade in; music a bit louder]
Red Sun... (insert the tagline here)

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[infomercial promoting some insence product (optional); tacky background and fonts with a small picture of red sun insence; a woman's bubbly voice]
call us now and you'll receive a package of special Red Sun insence for free!

(comments and suggestions pleeaaasseee..... some sentences might HAVE to be changed)